Rewriting for the web

After I had gathered all my research and decided what I wanted to involve in my website and how I had to rewrite it for the internet.

On websites it is imporatnt that things are written so that the most inportant thing catches the eye and so a reader can easily read the text, which is harder to do on a screen.

When writing my feature I decided that the best way I could do this was by writing in short paragraphs and involving what the paragraph was about right at the beginning of the first sentence. An example of how I did this was when I wrote about shoes. I told a reader in my first sentence, 'The next most inportant thing is shoes'. This would help the reader to quickly identify what was going to be said in the paragraph and therefore they could just skip the paragraph if they wanted to.

For my feature I also did instructions on how to customise your clothes. I decided to break the instructions up into numbers so it would be easy to read as well as using pictures to highlight what the instructions were. Therefore if a reader was just skim reading the page they would be able to see what to do or how the dress should look after the instructions are carried out.

I also decided to make the pages within my dating section easy for a reader to look at. To achieve this in the interview pages I decided to lay it out simply and then put the questions in itallic. The most important part of the content on my interview pages is the answer to the question I asked, if a reader can see what is the question and what is the answer they can then choose whether to skip the question and just read the answer.

Dor my diary pages I decided again to use a simple lay out. I wanted the reader to see exactly what happened each day, so I headed each section with what day of my investigation it was and what date.

The safet tips and the statistics were similar in the way that all of the bullit points had one important statement. I wanted the reader to be immediatley drawn to this point so therefore I made it bold. I also used a statement at the beginning of each section of my safety tips so that it was clear what the advice in that section would be.