Rewriting for the web 2

After I had finished most of my website I decided to look through to see if there was anything I wanted to change. Although I was as a whole happy with the site I felt that the fashion feature was quite wordy and therefore not easy enough to read.

To fix this I decided to use headings and sub headings in order to break the page up. I put headings such as 'Shoes' and 'Custominsing' to make the section even more clear to a reader.

By adding the headings I felt that the section was made very simple and flowed well from one part to the next.